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Mrs Fiddlesticks



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PostPosted: Sat Aug 30, 08 8:16 am    Post subject: 'reducing rubbish' articles Reply with quote
    

I wrote a series of articles for the parish mag - I've reworked them to be less 'local' and wondered if DS would like them. They're in a short series.

Here's what the first page looks like!

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Fee



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PostPosted: Sat Aug 30, 08 8:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

Very good

marigold



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PostPosted: Sat Aug 30, 08 8:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

Excellent! Can I make a teeny suggestion? If you changed "4 bin bags..." to (say) "4 fat bin bags..." it would fit the 10 green bottles tune better . Or "4 big bin bags..." . Just a thought .

Mrs Fiddlesticks



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PostPosted: Sat Aug 30, 08 9:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

marigold wrote:
Excellent! Can I make a teeny suggestion? If you changed "4 bin bags..." to (say) "4 fat bin bags..." it would fit the 10 green bottles tune better . Or "4 big bin bags..." . Just a thought .


depends how you sing it with a long stress on the 4 it does work (but I'm not musical so.. If the editors want it and are musical they can edit it as they wish )

marigold



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PostPosted: Sat Aug 30, 08 9:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
    

Mrs Fiddlesticks wrote:
marigold wrote:
Excellent! Can I make a teeny suggestion? If you changed "4 bin bags..." to (say) "4 fat bin bags..." it would fit the 10 green bottles tune better . Or "4 big bin bags..." . Just a thought .


depends how you sing it with a long stress on the 4 it does work (but I'm not musical so.. If the editors want it and are musical they can edit it as they wish )


I'm not musical either, so my suggestion might sound awful to the tuneful types . Look forward to seeing the rest of the articles.

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